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I think I'm alright
I stutter, I shake
I can't sleep at night
But at least I'm awake

I'm doing alright
I mean, I'm not dropping out
They worked me to dust
But it's me they're about

I'm swimming in puddles
I'm dancing in dreams
I'm seeing in visions
That aren't what they seem

I think I'm alright
I stutter, I shake
I'm barely alive
But at least I'm awake
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... meh, just a small peice of what's written so far of Cherry... I'm really happy with it, so... uh... I kind of felt like sharing ^^"
... Please take note, this was written for the purpose of being put to music, not as like, say, "The Raven" or something, so it won't be like that... but otherwise, oppinions are appreciated XD

From Anthony's point of veiw~

~characters, lyrics, and all that jazz belong to me ^^"
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~Rooster-Scratch Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
nice read, i liked
"I'm dancing in dreams
I'm seeing in visions
That aren't what they seem"
:)
i'd like to hear the music
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~HeartofGears Mar 14, 2013  Student General Artist
Haha, thank you! That means a lot! ^^"
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~Rooster-Scratch Mar 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
very welcome!
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*Me2Smart4U Dec 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
This is well written indeed. The emotions within are strong and has a very deep and unique flow.. I truly enjoyed reading :boogie:
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~HeartofGears Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
aw, thank you so much XD
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*Me2Smart4U Dec 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
you are most welcome :hug:
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~unusedEmotion Dec 15, 2012  Student Writer
I really really love it.
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~HeartofGears Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
omgosh, thank you! it really means a lot ^^"
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~unusedEmotion Dec 15, 2012  Student Writer
You're welcome ^^
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~HeartofGears Dec 15, 2012  Student General Artist
^^"
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